What do you think of this poem?
Flowers On A Desert Sea Written by Semper Fi Reborn I lay in the shadow of my daydreams, lick the coolness of my thoughts. I have raised the plains existence, seeking that which can not be purchased. I have traveled through time and space at a conduit of sounds. I have built rowhouses out of mercy, and baptized on God's Town. Planted roses made of licorice, toasted life with peppermint tea. But have never seen such beauty, flowers in a desolate sea.
Not to worry about Marty McNab or whatever it is, roses are red, is all he can do, so he is jealous. Keep up the good work that has been one of your better effort, I really liked reading it. Mon Smarty Marty would tell me to get back to basics, or which of my three books, he had the number "sucked" lol. I guess when he starts to get a royalty check he will be entitled to a negative opinion about good poetry.
